[Zekie]

Havent posted here for a long while.. Just thought of sharing what I was working on for a contest submission. I still have lots to go, but I will finish it soon..

[tek9z]

nice design and pose .. i like.
she sure has to have a very strong arm to
carry such a large gun so casual.
but what the heck.. good work already!
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edit:
do'h! the gun is supported by the ground.
nevermind my crit.
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[ June 18, 2002: Message edited by: tek9z ]

[Jeise]

Nice. I especially like the guns, being something of a gunhead myself, but I notice you've put two guns in both her hands. First: The larger gun looks *way* too heavy for her to lift with one arm, and second: both the weapons are being viewed from directly side-on, and I doubt that she would have positioned her hands in that exact way.
Don't get me wrong, I appreciate a good weapon design, but you should work at drawing your guns from different angles, to make it look more convincing.

[Michael la-Cour]

I like the idea And the pose is quite nice. There's though a few technicalities:

First, I don't know if you have used an actionline for drawing the figure (otherwise it's a technique I developed my figures poses a bit with)
Anyway, if you'd used it youd have seen the problem with the right (her left) leg, and it's connection to the hip...
Besides her right shoulder seens a bit edgy.

You could make it more lively by turning one of her feets, so they don't run so diagonally..

Hope I'm not being a bitch

I like her eyes very much, and all of her attetude. Quite nice. Looking forward to seeing it finished