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LoTekK member
Member # Joined: 07 Dec 2001 Posts: 262 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2002 2:58 pm |
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my girlfriend was taking a nap so i decided to paint a picture of her... then she moved before i could finish, so here it is, as is... i may work on it more, i may not... the image is at about 30% of it's original size of 2048x1024...
crits are more than welcome!
lemme point out my own crits first, though:
1. the head's a little big... (come to think of it, the head also looks more like a guy's head... o_O)
2. the color choices are absolutely awful... so desaturated... and that's after going through about 3 different repaints... :-/
3. when she moved, i lost the reference for the light and shadows on her breasts, so i realize it looks like her right breast is practically hanging out of the dress... o_O
4. the dress has no shading or crinkles yet
5. neither does the hair
6. her left leg looks kinda funky
so, fire away!
ps. had a quick question, actually... concerning number 2, about color, does anyone have any tips with regards to how they pick color... i always pick a color that seems relatively saturated and looks "right", at the time, but once i look back at it it looks dull and awful...
pps. i used some of mr t.'s custom brushes in this pic (you rock!), with pressure set to size only...
[ May 30, 2002: Message edited by: LoTekK ] |
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girish junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2001 Posts: 33 Location: Bay Area, CA
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2002 12:27 am |
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I don't think you have enough pink's in your skin color... and about the dress and hair, I'm sure you can make something up.  |
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manofsuede junior member
Member # Joined: 08 Apr 2002 Posts: 29 Location: Hendersonville TN, USA
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2002 11:41 pm |
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looks like her boob is about to pop out |
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LoTekK member
Member # Joined: 07 Dec 2001 Posts: 262 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Fri May 31, 2002 11:53 pm |
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looks like her boob is about to pop out |
thanks fer pointing that out, manofsuede, i had no idea:
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3. when she moved, i lost the reference for the light and shadows on her breasts, so i realize it looks like her right breast is practically hanging out of the dress... o_O |
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