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Tillek
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 Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 9:28 am |
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I'm having a hard time with the lighting and face on the girl. Multiple light sources are difficult. Also I think her eyes and lips are off.
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
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Marakaz Buzjuz
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| Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 10:27 am |
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THat's far beond my skill man  |
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Tillek
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| Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 10:37 pm |
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Heh, mine too.  Right now most of what I paint is just dumb luck and me fuddling with colors. |
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faeklone
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| Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 8:47 pm |
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Her yellow side of the face needs to be fixed, and that should fix most of the problems that you voiced. Her cheek could be reduced and her chin and jawline out and defined a bit more. her hairline needs to be lowered, and her ear needs to be positioned a little lower. Also, I don't think any of the yellow light would hit the ear. The purple would be a highlight on the eye however. The lips need to be fuller on the top and extended to the right of the picture a little bit.
Other than that I would suggest also fixing up the neckline of her suit so it is directly below her head and if her one shoulder is towards us, nearly removing the far shoulder from the pic totally. |
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Tillek
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| Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 8:19 am |
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| thank you Faeklone, I'll fix that right now. |
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