[CluelessMorgan]

Hi all,

I am drawing this for a contest on another forum and thought I might show it here. I know there is hardly no shading at all but that will come.

It is not something that I would usually draw but I am thinking it is turning out allright.

CnC is appreciated, ta.

[Robert Ashley]

As far as starting out, I think this is turning out fine! One thing that I would do is make the shoulders a little bit closer together. A womans shoulders are usually smaller than the hips. (also the shoulders on a general note should be about 3 heads in width.)

Other than that, this is comming out nicely. Keep at it!

[julia]

hey, its going good so far, but id really like to see the hair floating on the surface of the water. it is water, right? anyways, yah otherwise, i agree about the shoulders, but moreso that they arent too broad, just that the hips may be too narrow. give her some curve! well, yah, but looks good.

[Highfive]

Nice looking sketch, Morgan. Just one crit.

Having stalks with balls on the end is too cliche for antennae IMO. Grab your nearest Wildlife book and look for some interesting feelers in there. Giving her the fern-like moth antennae or long silverly strand-like feelers instead can make people look twice.

[pro-phet]

the shoulders should be 3 heads in width??? sure??? oh damn. the i must redraw my new pix. i thought the head was to big but not for sure.... shit!!