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Angantyr
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 12:57 pm     Reply with quote
Hi everyone, i'm new here

This is my first picture done in photoshop. I know some things are fucked up (the hands for example).. was to lazy to fix them though :/

Anyway, some comments would be nice
http://www.geocities.com/bernagud/

grr.. couldn't figure out how to link the image directly here. You have to check my page.

[ August 09, 2001: Message edited by: Angantyr ]
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lewis
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:12 pm     Reply with quote
hi i just looked at ur pic things i think u should do to improve it

. The chest lines need redefining
. It looks like she is pinned to a rock make it more 3d in the sense she is sittin ON it
. I think you should add a few more bits of details as to divert from lookin directly at the figure

any way thats what i think i may be speakin crap but i dont know hehe
ne way i am new just in and will start workin n new pics !
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jr
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:19 pm     Reply with quote

i outlined some drawing problems, the face looks alittle squished also. did you use reference? it helps alot if you do.
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