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Angantyr junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2001 Posts: 1 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 12:57 pm |
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Hi everyone, i'm new here
This is my first picture done in photoshop. I know some things are fucked up (the hands for example).. was to lazy to fix them though :/
Anyway, some comments would be nice
http://www.geocities.com/bernagud/
grr.. couldn't figure out how to link the image directly here. You have to check my page.
[ August 09, 2001: Message edited by: Angantyr ] |
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lewis junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2001 Posts: 2 Location: uk
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:12 pm |
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hi i just looked at ur pic things i think u should do to improve it
. The chest lines need redefining
. It looks like she is pinned to a rock make it more 3d in the sense she is sittin ON it
. I think you should add a few more bits of details as to divert from lookin directly at the figure
any way thats what i think i may be speakin crap but i dont know hehe
ne way i am new just in and will start workin n new pics !  |
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jr member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2001 Posts: 1046 Location: nyc
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:19 pm |
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i outlined some drawing problems, the face looks alittle squished also. did you use reference? it helps alot if you do. |
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