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thedaemon
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 11:20 pm     Reply with quote
I am finally going to try to draw those really spiffy grayscale sketches that I see and envy. So here's my first try so far, how am I doing? What do I need to do to make it better, please help.

All crits are welcome, really need help on how to do this type of art!
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thedaemon
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 24, 2001 2:05 pm     Reply with quote
Damn crosswinds, well just go to my home page and scroll to bottom and look at the monk pic Here Is the Lin
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thedaemon
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 10:22 pm     Reply with quote
Some one please crit!!!
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maceface
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 10:39 pm     Reply with quote
thats a pretty good start!
the thing that sticks out the most to me is his right eye...looks flat.
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Fat Assasin
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 2:26 pm     Reply with quote
It's kind of fuzzy right now. Put more variation in the edges, some hard, some soft.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 6:08 pm     Reply with quote
i agree with the dude above.. you need some more defined areas.. get down your shapes and stuff.. then blur all ya want
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thedaemon
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 8:53 pm     Reply with quote
So I should define the jawbone and such? I really don't see how it is blurry.. But I willsharpen the details. IE nose and mouth and try to fix that eye.
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