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kidavi junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Apr 2001 Posts: 18 Location: a perpendicular universe
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 5:52 pm |
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please tell me what you think, and what might make it better. as it is, its taking around 4 hours to render already though >_< and those cylindrical stairs in the pool, can you see them well enough? something about the light isnt quite right, but if i lower the ambiance on the pool, you cant see the stairs well enough to tell theyre stairs. transparency's already at 100%... |
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Jerry member
Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2000 Posts: 306 Location: Canada, Ontario
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 6:15 pm |
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hey... I like most of the stuff I see here... but there's not much of a realistic feel but I don't think you were going for that... I just like to say the tree 'stem' part doesn't look round enough... too flat... great stuff... |
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Svanur member
Member # Joined: 14 Aug 2000 Posts: 541 Location: Reykjavik, Iceland
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 5:42 am |
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I think there is too much light in the room, you could probably get more effect from it if the lights weren't so bright and global.
But I like how the light reflects on the water.
Another thing: is the room underseas or not? The windoews are so refracted. |
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Vgta member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2001 Posts: 447 Location: Arlington, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 6:07 am |
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I'd say give it more atmosphere by playing with the lights. |
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patrick member
Member # Joined: 07 May 2001 Posts: 163 Location: Maryland
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 11:47 pm |
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I'm no expert by any means, but i would say your over all global lighting is too high, maybe give it a falloff or lower intensity, maybe get rid of the global and add several softer colored lights to give it a warm feel, like blues on one side and some warm yellows and reds on the other? Its just too starkly white. |
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