[Elijah]

THis is just a notebook page I want somebody to tell me why it SUX
if that don't work, well damn.http://www.geocities.com/elijahpsyche/big_guy.jpg
oh well I am new at this


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[SporQ]

cause i can't see it

[Elijah]

this is wierd, My work shows up on my machine

[SporQ]

here, i found it...
http://elijah.freehomepage.com/cgi-bin/i/images/big_guy.jpg

SporQ

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[waylon]

It shows up fine, now. Hooray!

The basic design is pretty good (though the pose seems kind of unnatural.) I think the main problem is that the legs and forearms don't have any detail, while the rest of his body has a bit too much. (or at least, the detail could use a little cleaning up.) Make it a little more uniform, darken up the shadows a bit, and clean up the light areas a bit, and I think it'll be a lot better.

[Duckman2]

Don't press the pencil hard when your sketching, use quick light sweeping lines to get the general pose, then get tighter that just gives the figure a more dynamic feeling