[Rage-lion]

Pencil line art:


REAL markers. Did this before I received Photoshop


Hope you enjoy.

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[This message has been edited by Rage-lion (edited February 12, 2001).]

[This message has been edited by Rage-lion (edited February 12, 2001).]

[Rag]

Hey Rage-Lion,
Since noone is posting a crit I guess I'll give it a shot. Overall I think the lineart looks great, can't wait to see the photoshop coloring. One thing I noticed, well two things, her forearms are a bit thick for a female. And the left forearm, I believe the foreshortening is off. I think her forearm would extend a bit more toward the viewer. Hope this helps ya out. I know how it can be to recieve very little feedback. Oh yeah, nice job on the weapons btw.

[Rage-lion]

Thanks for the reply. I appreciate it.
I will take those into consideration.
It can get frustrating when your work gets buried in here, and not noticed.

[Elijah]

Yeah I hear you.
I think that unless she's got rock hard silicon the tits need to sag a little a not look like half cantalopes.

[S4Sb]

Her skin looks piggy Take more skin like tones

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[Scorchmon]

Pulse rifle, I guess she stole it from the set of Aliens. Elijah, I think her outfit is acting as a push-up bra.