[sharpe]

A picture i did a couple of weeks ago, trying to stop time, and make it a little dreamy. First post by the way.

any comments ?



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[Pigeon]

Did you manage to stop time? Difficult feat, that. You'd have to move very very fast or weigh as much as a black hole.

Anyway, the composition is very central. Radial, you might say. One might say The rendered face sort of keeps the rest of the abstract image from flying away, but I think it is too dominating overall.

As for how it's rendered, I think the eyes are slightly too small, or the space between them is too large. Also his eyes seem too white, and his left eye is as bright as his right. Adding more darks in his face in general would make it more dramatic. But if you like the effect you've got, hey that's fine.

I like the painterly aspect of the edges of the piece.



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-Pigeon
http://www.darklight.org/dunakin