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Bradford Guest
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 1:19 pm |
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By the look of your website, you are really into making graphics that have a radial design to them.
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 1:59 pm |
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Too symettrical for me. The thing in the center kind of comes out of nowhere... I'm assuming it's some kinda curved glass dome or soemthign so add a bit more shadow and highlights to defined the space. But, I really like the glass and the spokes showing underneath. Really cool. |
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tr0n junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2000 Posts: 28
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:50 pm |
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To me, it looks pretty filter-raped and unoriginal, but keep trying.
-tr0n |
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Striker member
Member # Joined: 20 Feb 2000 Posts: 152 Location: Oklahoma, USA
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:54 pm |
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Is it a compass??
It's technically well done and clean.. but somewhat lacking in composition. Show us more... |
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arniemg member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 2000 Posts: 107 Location: Pensacola, FL, USA
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 6:57 pm |
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i think that if you told us your intentions with this pic, then it would be easier to critique it.
I don't know what to think of it, because i don't know if its supposed to be a painting, a button for a webpage, or just somehting cool to look at...
...be more descriptive. |
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Tenarrus junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 3 Location: Seattle, WA - USA
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 7:45 pm |
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Thx for the thoughts. It's just something cool to look at. Doing all the work in Photoshop 5.5 alone and from scratch using no other graphics for overlays and such. With the sticks you might get the idea it is a compass as before with only 6 sticks it looked like you were going to sea with the wheel of a boat. Just was playing around and still working on the pic. It's gone through a lot since the last posting and I will be getting a updated pic in a day or so.  |
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Lumina junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2000 Posts: 2 Location: troms�, norway
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 8:36 pm |
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Hey u! I must say i really did enjoy your pic i love the colours.. its very warm, and very symbolic
but i must say that im very dissapointet over the fact that very many here really don't know how to give any compliments on a created work.. after all, everything has its own charm and style.. keep it up  |
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Tenarrus junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 3 Location: Seattle, WA - USA
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Tenarrus junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 3 Location: Seattle, WA - USA
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 12:46 am |
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I was forwarded to this forum by a good friend due to the passion I have for graphics and the professionalism of the site. I'm honored to be among the many talented individuals here.
Well here is the goods. Ready to be butchered and served for lunch.
There is a bigger 1024x768 pic at http://www.tenarrus.com/new/web1.jpg
Let me know what you think...
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Light member
Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 528 Location: NC, USA
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 12:56 am |
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This is another one that is hard to crit.
The composition seems a little boring. The one object in the center of the screen seems to just sit there.
This is very abstract but doesnt seem visually interesting enough. |
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Spitfire member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 2009 Location: Amsterdam, the Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 1:36 am |
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Sorry, i find it incredibly boring. It only shows knowledge of Photoshop, not of design in general.
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