[Kuzya]

hey there .. well been workin on it for few days and here what i got so far .. please comment on what i do wrong ..

[SporQ]

that looks cool, it has some nice depth to it. you just need to refine it more, it looks very rough.

SporQ

[Kuzya]

yea i know it still rough but I am still an amature .. and i don't really know much where to go from shadin .. on her body .. i will add more highlights tomorrow .. and for skirt i think i am done with it ..

well thanx for comments .. please help me out with some info peoplss if you can on what my next steps should be. .. thanx =)

[Nex]

you did the shading pretty good so far.

You'd however probably have a lot faster progress if you would make up the shapes yourself. otherwise you will have a hard time coming up with poses of your own later because you don't know the anatomy behind the figure.

could you post your reference?
its hard to judge anything without that.

[Kuzya]

yea sure here is my reference .

[Light]

This is a good start. Try blending the lips and features as a whole and not keeping them as seperate. Also, saturate the colors some more. And add more colors.. its a bit monochromatic as it is.

Oh and make her eyes a little larger or brighter and work on the left side of face some.

[Kuzya]

thanx for the comment .. well the reason I keep everythign separate is cause afraid to mess up and must redo the whole thing ever.. but i did notice now that i need to blend her lips .. thanx =)