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Author   Topic : "CriT: WINTER WOLF"
Loukus
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Joined: 29 Oct 2000
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Location: Glen Burnie, MD US of A

PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 11:17 am     Reply with quote
This is a picture I did today off the brandenburg wolf picture, winter wolf(derp!) that hangs in my bedroom.

The wolf looks kindof wierd, perhaps it's a problem with the anatomy,... It's done with a mouse. I tried to back off some from the smudge tool, and use the eraser with the smudge, I like the little snowwy mist at his feet but, On the whole I don't really like it. Suggestions on improving certainly welcome with crits. My layers got a little screwed up too, so the sticks by the wolf are multiplied against him, not quite sure what happened there...

Joel Loukus

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daz199
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Location: Surrey, BC, Canada

PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 1:48 pm     Reply with quote
the background looks really cool and icy, but you should put some more work into the wolf, define it a bit more, add some more shadows
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Krazy
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Joined: 09 Dec 2000
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
in all honesty it looks better than my stuff but its not that great....but you can snaz it up a bit to make it look better since im sure you put alot of work into it, one if your going to have a wolf have hair yes hair and darker shadows make em pop out.. ass for the back ground it looks ok but it looks more like a frame than a background so hmm try giving it perspective and depth good luck want to see it again keep it up
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Loukus
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 4:42 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, I ha d a lot of trouble with the wolf, I throw some more time at it and see what I get, with more darks etc...

JL
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