[tyron]

Hi guys!
it's been a while... things has kept me busy.
but here's a quick picture i did today.

the thing i need help with is the eyes, atleast that's what i think it is.
they look wierd, but i think there are other errors too, like the position and angle of the nose for example..
maybe someone could give it a shot and fix the errors? i'd be really greatful then..

time spent on it is about 30 minutes and i used painter.

BTW, SYNJ! if you read this... do you still use powwow? then which e-mail adress do you use?

ohh.. and heres the image!

see you!

[This message has been edited by tyron (edited December 15, 2000).]

[jHof]

I held my hand up verticly threw the middle of her face so one eyes is on each side of my hand. Try that... You can see that "her" right eye is not looking at you. But the left eye, is looking at you. That should fix your problem.

Pix looks pretty coo other than that. Not sure what its for, so couldn't really comment to much more on it.

-Hof

[Solitaire]

Her mouth has a wrong angle - it's a very striking error; just look at it in relation to chin and nose.
I really don't like the eyes, as imo they doesn't fit to the rest of the head (break in style).
Just some corrections on the lineart and I think it should work as your coloring seems to be OK .

hope this will help to finish this pic

[tyron]

Hi guys!
Thanks for the help, you're both damn right.
i don't really know how to do the eyes though..
Solitaire, you said that the eyes wasn't drawn using the same style as the rest of the image, is that perhaps because of the flat eyecolor?

BTW! It's my birthday today! yippe! i'm now 18 years old!

see you!

[peter]

happy birthday, congratulations !

to the pic: very nice, great colors.
perhaps the head is a little to small... when you substract the volume of the hair, than remains only a few place for the head/brain...

cheers
peter


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[tyron]

Hi peter!
thanks man
yeah, you're right.. she needs a bigger brain..

made a new one... pretty quick. pretty fun. pretty odd. and not very good.


see you!

[Solitaire]

I try to scribble down what I had in mind...
but maybe that'll take some time as I am heaily occuoied at te moment:/
nice brainy

[This message has been edited by Solitaire (edited December 16, 2000).]

[nightmare]

that elf has one hell of a neck

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it's all a conspiracy!

[tyron]

he sure does