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donk
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i did this last night. redo's, critique's, death threats, you name it.
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johnboy
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 5:10 pm |
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| not bad for a start, this is a start right? well i suggest that you start all your sketches with a pencil drawing and color from there. The pic now isn't bad, just needs shading, like in the blue face mask... |
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Krazy
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 6:55 pm |
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not bad i especially like the lack of color the one tone face mask...hehe im only kidding well i cant say its better than me but its a start...right its is a start. hehhe i had to us ethat sorry johnboy  keep practicing like me, while i work on my spelling also |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 7:51 pm |
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| Hehe.... the white doesn't look like pure white. For some reason the picture looks a bit murky on my monitor...... anyway, you need to add more shadows on the face mask. You have shadows on the eyes... but not the mask . Othewrise, pretty decent. Might be cooler if you finished up with the whole body of the guy. |
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Anthony J
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 8:00 pm |
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advice: hope its worth your while
Try to put a background in there, and detail the face more...good start, but thats just what it is..a start
get working
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