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Ben_kas
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Sorry
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 9:10 pm |
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ooo, i like how u used smudging to your advantage, looks real cool and gives it suggests a texture. good job, i wanna see it colored!
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Gecko
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| Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 12:14 am |
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Like it very much. Everything looks ok except for the "eyebrows", they look nonsymmetrical.
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 12:25 am |
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Neato. It reminds me of a character design on Feng's site:
http://www.artbyfeng.com/Crea_02.html
I like the shading 
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Ben_kas
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| Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 3:33 pm |
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| My little brother noted the bad elbows and the uneveness of his upper torse, I tried cleaning it up, but since the picture was drawn originally without upper limbs they werre added in later and resulted in the odd Upper torse bone structure, Thanks for the crits and will post coloured version in about a week. |
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