[FrageNSTEIN]

Here is a picture I colored for a guy. He is here somewhere, but I can't find the thread where I spoke to him. Forget his name, but he is at alun@cmetech.... . ANyway, ctique it por favor:

[nova]

hm.

i've been working on some comic coloring myself, and it is difficult to start with. maybe i'm not the best judge, but nevertheless..

i like the image in general, and the colors fit nicely together.

i some wee qualms, though.

i think it's a little too streaky as it is, and the shading is too harsh for its own good. also, pick a light source and shadow it accordingly for pete's sake you really can't tell where the light is coming from. try doing more radial highlighting, too.. it would soften up those streakies a lil bit.

the gun shouldn't be lighted so globby IMHO, maybe it's some space-age metal i don't know about, but nonethless, for now, decide on angles to make it look sharper.

something about that arm is bugging me, too. it's hard to explain.

take a look:




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[This message has been edited by Nova (edited December 01, 2000).]