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Singa junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Nov 2000 Posts: 35 Location: Enschede, Overijsel, The Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:12 am |
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What do think of the following picture:
I've drawn her with an wacom intuos, photoshop6 and an example photograph. |
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:37 am |
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Looks pretty good so far. But a good rule to follow is that if you're going to draw a head, draw a neck too. It doesn't take much longer, and it really helps counter that "disembodied head" look.
As far as what you have down already, the shadow under her hair and the edge of her chin (on our left) don't look quite right... they're a bit dark, and not blended smoothly enough, I think. |
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solidtransient member
Member # Joined: 07 Nov 2000 Posts: 157 Location: AL, USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:47 am |
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The picture looks good. Go ahead and give her a neck too. Did you draw this pic from a reference picture? or is it something you just made up?
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Singa junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Nov 2000 Posts: 35 Location: Enschede, Overijsel, The Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 1:29 pm |
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Thanks, for the advise!
Yes I used a reference picture for this. Because no neck can be seen on that picture, it is a little more difficult, but i'm tweaking the drawing right now. |
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Singa junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Nov 2000 Posts: 35 Location: Enschede, Overijsel, The Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 3:14 pm |
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I've added some "body" , here:
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Skyraider junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2000 Posts: 45 Location: Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:36 am |
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Hey, that's a major improvement Singa! I'd decrease the contrast and saturisation of the background a bit, since it draws the attention away from that nice chick )
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