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Singa
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:12 am     Reply with quote
What do think of the following picture:


I've drawn her with an wacom intuos, photoshop6 and an example photograph.
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waylon
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:37 am     Reply with quote
Looks pretty good so far. But a good rule to follow is that if you're going to draw a head, draw a neck too. It doesn't take much longer, and it really helps counter that "disembodied head" look.

As far as what you have down already, the shadow under her hair and the edge of her chin (on our left) don't look quite right... they're a bit dark, and not blended smoothly enough, I think.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 11:47 am     Reply with quote
The picture looks good. Go ahead and give her a neck too. Did you draw this pic from a reference picture? or is it something you just made up?



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Singa
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 1:29 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks, for the advise!
Yes I used a reference picture for this. Because no neck can be seen on that picture, it is a little more difficult, but i'm tweaking the drawing right now.
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Singa
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2000 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
I've added some "body" , here:
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:36 am     Reply with quote
Hey, that's a major improvement Singa! I'd decrease the contrast and saturisation of the background a bit, since it draws the attention away from that nice chick )

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