[Shousetsu]

Heres an anime picture I did just now. I shaded it pretty crappy, and the scan really messed it up. Anyways Im going to be coloring this in Photoshop so could someone tell me if theres any last minute changes I should make? She is going to be leaning on something so dont pay attention to her ierd balancing act.

Anyways, all comments and crits are welcome thanks

[SporQ]

it seems like 'her' right hand should be higher up on the page, it would indicate a little more depth that way. her left foot seems to be a little off anatomy wise.

anyway, those are small issues. overall, the pic is good. good strong lines and a well defined style.

SporQ

[Jezebel]

I like

The only thing that seems a little odd to me is her outstretched leg. It doesn't really look relaxed. It looks stiff almost to the point of being uncomfortable, like she's trying to hold her leg off the ground a little bit. I don't know too much about proportions but it also almost looks like it's not long enough... but maybe that's just because the foot is cut off. Make sure the foot is in the finished image

-Beth

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[Shousetsu]

ok thanks, Ill fix the hand in the cg. Heh I ran out of paper, thats why theres no foot, the damn thing took up the entire page. I believe the proportions are right because her knee goes up to her shoulder, and her other leg is the exact same as the bent one.

The feet are as good as I can get them. Holy crap toes are hard to draw I thought Id never get them right.

[This message has been edited by Shousetsu (edited November 27, 2000).]

[jasonN]

Hi Shousetsu

I really like your sketch, nice dark linework and strong contrast.

Apart from what the others said, I guess I can only add that the ankles seem a little blocky. But that's just a matter of taste.
I like ankles that are a little more slender and shapely, if you get what I mean. But it's all up to you

Post the coloured image when it's done!

-Jason

[Maruman]

hey very nice pic.

the face looks OMG inspired. ?? yes no ??

anyway i like it alot.


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[red com]

hey..nice pic.... ive got the feeling ure inspierd by oh my godess... am i right?
i like the pose to.. =)

[red com]

hey there.. nice pic , i get the feeling its oh my godess! inspierd...
i like the pose to... =)

[Darkmoon]

i know im not a god or anything but here is my two cents



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[Jenn]

I likes.. planning to color it ?

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[g:tech]

Shousetsu-

Nice job! Aside from the things mentioned above, I'm impressed with the look of the image. A lot of times when I see people try to draw anime, they usually fudge up a little on the face and hair. I think these two things are the strongest in your image. Good job! Nice job on keeping with the anime shading style too.

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[ChanXiaoHing]

Looks nice. ^_^ One thing I noticed that noone else mentioned is the shading on the hair. There seems to be a rather bright highlight on the back of her head, which seems out of place, since the rest of the pic suggests that the lighting is coming form the left.

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[Shousetsu]

thanks, I just shaded it for no reason actually, so I wasnt paying much attention. I just inked it and am going to color it soon.

[Shousetsu]

thanks, well its not really inspired by amg, I just used the same style eyes(but those eyes are used in countless other anime titles too). I cant put her arm there because shes going to be leaning on something, so it wouldnt make much sense to have it support her when shes already being supported.

[Skyraider]

Very cool, I like it! Face is very nice, but maybe you want to accent her chin a bit. hair is nice too. The left knee is a little weird though...

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