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Topic : "MY FIRST TABLET PIC!!!! AND MY FIRST PIC IN 3 MONTH!!!!" |
dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 9:03 pm |
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i've been so busy lately, no time to use my brand new spanking tablet. Anyway, here's the pic, please tell me what you think, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Thanks
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Diggity junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Oct 2000 Posts: 6 Location: Mahomet, IL, USA
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 9:33 pm |
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Is that a brand new "spanking" tablet or a brand spanking new tablet? Hmm..
Your picture is pretty cool. I dig the colors in the sunset. It seems like there is a lot of ultra-defined stuff in the background, but up front there isn't much detail. I'm really kind of working with perspective and depth myself, so I don't have the right to say much just yet , but I can tell that the figure could use considerably more detailing to fit with what's in the picture already. Also, that big black mass has got to go, and a lot of other things could use a little clean-up. It may be that your monitor is just down pretty dark so you might not be seeing what I'm talking about (I've noticed that when I turn mine down the image looks cleaner). Anyway, that's my $.2 Keep up the good work. |
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Diggity junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Oct 2000 Posts: 6 Location: Mahomet, IL, USA
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 12:16 pm |
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It might be better to work on making your forms look better and more dynamic rather than working more detail into your next pic. You don't want to get stuck in a mode where all you're doing is sharp details and you're not improving your base knowledge of how things are structured (I'm guilty of this sometimes). What I really meant by my last post is that when something is closer to the viewer it should be at least as detailed or more than something in the background. |
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dr . bang member
Member # Joined: 07 Apr 2000 Posts: 1245 Location: Den Haag, Holland
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 11:51 pm |
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Hey! Thanks for the reply! I'll try to add more details in my pic next time  |
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