Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Archive : Sep99 - Dec00
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "MY FIRST TABLET PIC!!!! AND MY FIRST PIC IN 3 MONTH!!!!"
dr . bang
member


Member #
Joined: 07 Apr 2000
Posts: 1245
Location: Den Haag, Holland

PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 9:03 pm     Reply with quote
i've been so busy lately, no time to use my brand new spanking tablet. Anyway, here's the pic, please tell me what you think, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Thanks

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Diggity
junior member


Member #
Joined: 10 Oct 2000
Posts: 6
Location: Mahomet, IL, USA

PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 9:33 pm     Reply with quote
Is that a brand new "spanking" tablet or a brand spanking new tablet? Hmm..

Your picture is pretty cool. I dig the colors in the sunset. It seems like there is a lot of ultra-defined stuff in the background, but up front there isn't much detail. I'm really kind of working with perspective and depth myself, so I don't have the right to say much just yet , but I can tell that the figure could use considerably more detailing to fit with what's in the picture already. Also, that big black mass has got to go, and a lot of other things could use a little clean-up. It may be that your monitor is just down pretty dark so you might not be seeing what I'm talking about (I've noticed that when I turn mine down the image looks cleaner). Anyway, that's my $.2 Keep up the good work.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Diggity
junior member


Member #
Joined: 10 Oct 2000
Posts: 6
Location: Mahomet, IL, USA

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 12:16 pm     Reply with quote
It might be better to work on making your forms look better and more dynamic rather than working more detail into your next pic. You don't want to get stuck in a mode where all you're doing is sharp details and you're not improving your base knowledge of how things are structured (I'm guilty of this sometimes). What I really meant by my last post is that when something is closer to the viewer it should be at least as detailed or more than something in the background.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
dr . bang
member


Member #
Joined: 07 Apr 2000
Posts: 1245
Location: Den Haag, Holland

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 11:51 pm     Reply with quote
Hey! Thanks for the reply! I'll try to add more details in my pic next time
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group