Matt Elder
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Joined: 15 Jan 2000
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Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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 Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 1:02 am |
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Ah d'oh ... warm fuzzy feeling. The visual effect has really improved a great deal from yesterday's posting of the red bikini character. Glad I could help out as I remember figuring out line thickness the hardway and with hindsight looked at my images and went "Of Course".
I really like the way you have a nice clean, simple line technique and colouring that matches this. It is pretty effective. For the most part it looks like you've considered the light source and made it consistent.
Once you feel that you've confident with thicker lines, try to vary the thickness along a line. This can be particularly helpful in arms and legs. If this doesn't make sense, pick up an American 'image' comic (ie particularly a female title ie Witchblade, Phathom), to see how they do it. Otherwise, email me in a few days and I'll try to do a rough sketch of what I mean.
The image is coming along nicely. Maybe pay a little more attention to the hair and add in a tones (ie lighter and darker yellows) to give it an additional feeling of depth.
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See ya on da flip side
Matt
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