[A.Buttle]

The nose is off. The right nostril should go up, not down, making the nose a sort of "V" shape.

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[wigin]

well the drawing is good. I must say that they are a few things wrong with it. THe left eye is slighty bigger then the right one . i personally think the nose is off. Its too long .. do you know what i mean??? and last i think the shape of the head is KINDA weird not very nature ... look at some female drawings maybe that could help you correct those problems... Other than that Its GREAT.... Just a few ajustments .....

[Bugscratch]

I'm no authority on this but I think her right shoulder seems to be farther away than the anatomy of the left shoulder would make you think. But again, I'm no authority on this. Otherwise than this and the few points already noted it's great.

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[Dryfire]

If i saw a chick with a face shaped like that i'd run screaming, i hate those bony model-type chicks, hmm try and add a bit more roundness to the cheekbone and such

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[ArMaDoN]

Hi How are u,
well then. the pic is fantastic. well done my friend. the comments made on the pic is true very true ... but for the boney type face. If you look at art from the Bible and all the biblical figures most of those faces are hard. see the evelution of humans have evolved us into soft people. in the old days people used to be hard type people and that means that this angel maybe right for the type of time it was created...

Or then again i might be wrong well done my friend

[Rob M]

For reference, im not kidding either, look at a Victoria's Secret catalog!

I swear to god, I bet that this exact pose will be in there somewhere. Im betting thats where he got his inspiration.

[edible snowman]

her nose looks too long, and i think her eyes are too big, but like other people have said... im no authority on this

[Snake Grunger]

Her eyes tell me something like, "My, my, that peanut butter was just so tasty! GIMMIE SOME MILK, YOU MUSTARD BASTARD! After that, fix the dryer, it's broken."

Thought, her head is too much on the right side. That, OR, her left side of the torso is too big. Her left eye should be smaller, too, according to the tilt you gave her head. But, in general, it's pretty good. Though you mixed cartoony outline and realistic shading, creates an unbalance in the image. Work on that

[ozenzo]

and I'm getting ready to color it. Let me know if there are any major abnormalities before I start.Here it is:

Let me know ...thanks