[DaveT]

A pic I posted a short while ago but no-one replied so Ill try again.


And because no-one posted any replies last time Im just going to assume there is nothing wrong with this image and there is nothing I can do to improve it.



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[Rinaldo]

Didn't show up last time.

It looks pretty good now that I can see it.

Watch out for the T-shirt. don't use lines just for the sake of it so much. Above the breasts it should be flat, unless it is really skin tight. use the capabilities of the computer more. you are basicaly drawing in line and then going over the line with a colour. A line represents a break in value planes, usuialy one side is different to the other. if you are going to colour it you might want to draw your lines diferently. Have a close look ant Anime stuff and see how they use line and colour. the pics in the background are a good example of line and colour.

L8r

[Isric]

she's lop-sided.