[ozenzo]

it got any worse....
It's Sharon Bruneau in case any one was wondering here she is


still working on it
...it sure would be nice to have a bigger scanner.........

[This message has been edited by ozenzo (edited July 26, 2000).]

[Fred Flick Stone]

Oz-not a bad rendering. I can't believe this got not crits. Oh well, maybe not everyone is kind to big yoked women.
One thing you might want to consider, especially when drawing from muscular images, is try not to overdo the half tones. All these buff monkeys sit in tanning boothes all day charring their skin, equally as fake as their steroid invested muscles. They are the "ideal" shape for the muscles of the human form, but a little too plastic.

The fingers in the hand on her head are a bit too repetitious, or, each finger is described almost exactly like the other ones. Be careful of that. When the fingers are grouped together, don't split them apart by identifying each finger. Doing that causes the action of the hand to be lost. All the fingers together create an action, that is more what you want to identify with. Just find the knuckle indications that stand out in that mass, and identify them, this offers the suggestion of the fingers rather than the overall emphasis being on every particular.

The back is also a bit strange in its anatomical delineation. Especially the lower back, where there is really one dominant muscle defining form here, the paraspinal muscles. One cylider on either side of the spine. They create a nice rythym, and attachment of the rib cage to the buttocks region, and should be simplified in its explanation.

I really like how you described the right leg and glute. Really nicely rendered, simple and bold. Not a lot of value range, this is a good thing. And the shapes are simple and clean. If you can do this sort of treatment everywhere else, this image will be a real winner. Keep the sketches coming, you are making waves of progress probably without seeing that you are.

Excellent....

[SaltyDog]

Man that guy has a nice butt!

[ozenzo]

Thanks Fred ..you are a Jedi. I'll keep working!!

SaltyDog- I agree

[This message has been edited by ozenzo (edited July 31, 2000).]