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Axl member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2000 Posts: 411 Location: London, England
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 5:45 am |
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Here's my third picture posted on the forum.
It's a mixture of pencil and digital work. The two characters are Ashley and Merlose from Vagrant Story.
Any comments would be appreciated.
My other work can be viewed at: www.kazuya.freeserve.co.uk
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Nex member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 2086 Location: Austria
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2000 6:48 am |
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I like the style its drawn with.. looks neat..
The male character is distorted.. the anatomy is not right here (Extremities unproportional in size to each other)
there is a lot of other stuff going on here that needs fixing.. I guess you would profit from studiing anatomy and human figure in 3 dimensions a bit more.
The shadows are too black imho.. and too sharp-
Keep 'em coming, no retreat, so surrender
Cya
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