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hi,



thx for every comment.

[ex]

Hey, nice picture.. if you want my crit, keep reading.

NOTE: The angle perpotion is wrong. Not enough to ruin the picture.. but just enough to be noticable. I think if that was fixed.. if you automatically fix most of the following imperfections i have found.

1: Ear is too high. If the angle was fixed i think that would fix this problem.

2: If this guy is screaming then his eyebrow should be reised in this particular part. If you study that pose you will find that.

3: The place where his face connects to his neck looks almost complety disconnect from the neck.

4: The head looks too high. Like i said before.. that would probley be fixed if the perportion was right.

5: From this angle.. which is hard to tell from.. i dont think the other lip would be visable.

6: (not labled) I think that the problem with the perportion is that.. the hole figure looks stretched. And is filled with a lot of extra skin. The head should be cut down, and the back of the neck should be brought down with the head also. And the face is looking one way, and the eyes are looking another.. that would help also. And the face looking one way and the neck and head kinda leaning toward another.

7: The face is looking on a downward angle, and the ear is pointing upward and back. But yet the face is forward and down.

8: His beard should probley be brought higher and spread down to the neck a little also. Unless he shaved that



Other then that it looks really good! I like the pose a LOT.. sorry i put so much crit. in here.. but this is what i like people to do with my image.. if you dislike that.. i'll try not to do it again


[This message has been edited by ex (edited May 28, 2000).]

[ex]

Sorry.. forgot something..
The ear is also too far from the rest of the face.

[Foxfire]

Nice pic here are my opinions. As the eyebrows go up the wrinkles (For lakc of a better word) On the forehead slope down with the lowest part between the eyes. The lips should look streached especialy on the sides. Eyes are always wet! Hope I was able to help keep up the great work the skin tone and lighting are great !

[Sedone]

It's kinda' cool looking with all those numbers on it.

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[engl]

thx

[Lange_Pisang]

Want some critics?

I've got them at home, in my basement...
They are my prisoners, I give them only bread and water because they can't give constructive CRITIQUE...

Ok, just kiddin' here...

Well, I think it's a fine pic and I don't have any CRITIQUE because everything is already said...sorry 'bout that...

[Binke]

eh perportions?
dont u mean proportions?

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[AdezJ]

Hey
ex: which part do you recommend for eating? (with potato)

[ex]

...? Say what?

[Stolln]

Yes, perpotions are very difficult to learn/understand, much like spelling, eh ex?

[ex]

What could he be talking about?? Does anyone know?? hehe.. im only 13.. gimme a brake!

[Incarnatation]

im 17 ande a stil cnat splell tihings ploperly

seriously though i cant

[ex]

lol

[Moose]

i dont know what all that other jazz is, but here is what i see with your image.......
i like the fact that you give the detail of all the wrinkles and veins. The wrinkles look just like they are there....not actual folded skin. im seeing this especially above the bridge of the nose, imbetween the eyes. the forehead is the same way. the wrinkles to the right of the eye are good, but i think the ones on the forehead and nose there could use a little retouching. there may also be some wrinkles and folds to add near the back of the neck....but i dont know. the ear is bothering me, not that it is too far, i think it is ina good spot, but it looks like it is glued to his head, and not sticking out in space.

other than that, im jealous. i can do this stuff on paper with a pencil but i havent yet been able to do anything like this with my tablet and puter yet. im workin though....my time will come.....haha. nice work man.

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