[Kyri]

Hiya,
I did this a little while ago, I think it still needs some work, let us know what you think.

Kyri

[lotor]

You say us...as in you and the painting?
Thats kind of creepy. But I think the painting is beautiful. I really like the fact that it doesn't look digital. It looks like oil paint. What program is it and can you give a description of how you did it.

And the name and phone # of the model wouldn't hurt me at all.
ciao

[freddy flicks stones]

The face is interesting. The red on the face, is that blood? Might want to reconsider it, or redesign the shape of it. The nipple on the left breast looks like a cap, too hard an edge around it. And the bottom of the rib cage doesn't look like it exists. It needs the bottom rib line better defined.

Inteesting look, Not too digital at all...A little bit more work on this will really pull it into a strong peice.

[samdragon]

great stuff, love the skin texture!
Only thing that bugs me the most is the area under the breast, Looks as if the abbs are bulging too much, maybe tone down the highlight some more.
I like the way you have the figure appearing out of the darkness, very nice effect!


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[B]

i think everythign with the image works,. cept for the silver capped areola

[Wildkat]

Kyri, I love the intenseness you have captured with this painting, the lighting and emotion are superb... it has a deep lustful darkness to it....
.....fantastic.....

[osk]

Amaizing Kyri .. very cool .. i love everything about it .. very dark moody .. dont have words to describe .. there is just something about that picture . cant describe it .. If you ever have it printed or something like a poster size . i will definitely buy .it from ya ...

[Tinusch]

That's so cool. You guys use the greatest skin tones...

Lotor: Heh, I think he meant he and Cos...

[Frost]

Kyri: Wow! Very dark and moody! Love it!

[kos.mandis]

Looks great! "We are bord "
The only thing that bothers me is the stomach-looks like an alien is about to emerge-which oddly explains and the blood btw

[Kyri]

Thanks everybody for the critisism and nice comments.

Lator I know I'm wierd, but not that wierd!! Not me and the painting, the us thing is just the way some of us here in Good Ole Blighty talk, it really just means me tho. The gal is no body in particular just a girl living in my head. But if I did know a girl that looked like that do you think I would give her number you!, I don't think so.... ;P The pic was done in photoshop and the reason you can see some textures is because I worked over a rough painting I had done in acrylic paint, and I tried to keep some of them.

Fred, yeah I know there are a lot of things I gotta fix on it and I agree with you totally on what you are saying, I think the stuff that bothers me the most about it is the nipple which is definitely too sharp, and the blood that looks very odd, thank's a lot for your help and advice, cheers.

Samdragon a few people have mentioned the bulge, so I think you are right. cheers.
Kat , Osk, Tinusch, Frost, thanks guys, your nice comments are much appreciated.

Genesequence, your pic looks great, If I was to comment on anything, I would say try
thinking about where the light source is coming from, it looks like it's coming from the left judging by the head but it isn't very clear by how the shadows are indicated on the body, for example I think there would be more shadow cast from the breast on the left and the right side of the body....maybe add some deeper shadows under the breasts too, always good, heh, heh.

Kos, the facehugger bursting out was the next thing I was gonna add. ;P

[genesequence]

Kyri:

I am almost too ashamed (but not quite!) to post my image that is similar (but not as good) as yours. I guess this "naked chick in the nethervoid" theme is popular. I didn't go to the trouble of adding "style" or "mood" to my drawing. Maybe putting the two together will show you what a good image you've got there!



-genesequence

[SaltyDog]

Very very nice..other than what's already been said, I think the upper lip is bulging out a bit, like she has a mouthguard in. If you darkened it up (putting it more in shadow) it would gel better with the rest of the head.
But impressive nonetheless. And don't mind Lotor, he thinks everyone's creepy.
Z-Dog in da house!!

[Kyri]

Hiya,
Cheers SaltyDog for the comments and feedback.

I worked on the pic some more. I hope the changes I've made are an improvement, or even noticeable. Any comments would be much appreciated, and thanks again to everyone that let me know what they thought was wrong with it.
Cheers.

Kyri

[ex]

Hey! where did the blood go? I loved that part man! hehe I like it. You made it lighter.. thats cool. But my personal oppinion on the nipple is that it's way too dark and looks like its not even connected to the breast. But other then that it looks really good dude.

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[This message has been edited by ex (edited May 17, 2000).]

[Binke]

Wahh, scary chick!
Great piece Kyri! I agree, that the nipple looks a little odd..try to .. uhm make the edges of it blend into the rest of the breast a bit more. So that it does not look so solid.

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[Frost]

I want her. =)

[osk]

O mY GOSH .. NOW it looks BETTER .. blood looks better .. and the whole composition is good .. Oh I love .IT FOR REAL .. ABOUT THE NIPPLE I know it looks a little wierd BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I LIKE IT that way , no seriously i dont think you should change it .. leave it alone .. is good as it is .. and again if you ever post this acrylic painting on like E-bay or something . I will BID .. wouldn'y YOU guys?

[ex]

Hell yeah dude!! Oh.. and i just want you to know you inspired me to try to plaint with acrylics.. and it came out sooo bad!! haha.. again dude.. great job

[Wildkat]

the way she is lit... the mystery.... the total feel of the pic.... it's spectacular...

[Kyri]

Hey Ex the bloods still there, you just gotta squint a bit.
I agree about the nipple, it still does look a bit odd..but *&$% knows what I'm
gonna do next about it, It,s making soft nipples hard that's usually the problem.... ;P
Cheers Frost mate ,It looks like we are both partial to these mysterious, aluring seductresses.
Binke, don't you start about the nipple too!!Thanks man.
Osk I'm glad you like the new version better, never really thought about having it printed, but if I ever do....you know.

Ex, I'm suprised and glad that I would have inspired anyone,
Cheers mate....

Kat, thank's very much for the kind words
They are much appreciated.

Ok, I better stop now before this post is overun with smilies

[Digital Genesis]

Looks a bit like this one...
Copyrights to Kevin Taylor

[Binke]

now THAT's a nipple.





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[Shadow]

heh!!! The first one looks exacly like my science teacher, but the second one simply looks hot =) GREAT JOB.. (nipple kinda bothers me, but its OK!)

-S (exy!)

[Kyri]

I definetly prefer the nipple on the other guys pic and the way the breasts are shaded. I was quite suprised at the similarity of the breast area of both our pics. Digital Genesis cheers for posting it here, it made reconsider if I should leave the nipple that way. I've done another version of it
and I was wondering which one people prefered.

Oh and cheers Shadow.

Kyri

[ex]

Much better dude. It looks connected now and a lot better. - great job

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[Kyri]

Cheers ex,
Glad you like it.