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Marksman
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 Posted: Thu May 18, 2000 8:31 pm |
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well here is my latest pic
i hate to say it but i was inspired by a car ad i saw on the teev 
all coments welcome
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| Posted: Thu May 18, 2000 10:41 pm |
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Nice.
Critique? Here you go:
1) The pictue looks very bright and with a lot of Ambient light. If you go for Atmosphere cut back on that ambient light.
2) The metal on the weapons does not look like metal, its just grey. A texture map or (even better) a raytracing map would be good there.
3) The fire on the poles is not bright enough and does not cast light.
4) The trees all look like you took one tree and placed it around in the scene by copiing it. Make More different trees and then place them around the image.
5) The figure in the background does not look so powerful that he could hold the axe the way he does now. You should shorten the handle a bit.
I recommend studiing some pictures with spooky scenes and then you will quickly understand what I mean.
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Marksman
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| Posted: Thu May 18, 2000 10:52 pm |
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thanks Nex
some good points i shall do some ajustments
and repost
yes the trees are all the same tree
hmm good point about the figer i'll see what i can do
thanks agen
ps wheres my slap? 
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