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Narzul · junior member Member # Joined: 23 Apr 2000 Posts: 13

comments and critisizem are welcome...
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-Ori

[This message has been edited by Narzul (edited May 17, 2000).]

[This message has been edited by Narzul (edited May 19, 2000).]

Lange_Pisang · Posted: Wed May 17, 2000 10:13 am

AAARGH!!! always that FCKN!! little red "error" cross, I hate them! I get nightmares from that!! AARGH!!!

quote:
Some folks can see dead people
- can you see dead pages?!

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http://www.geocities.com/lange_pisang/Photoshop_Art/KruegerB.gif
awwwwww...still have to learn a lot,
-Lange Pisang (Long Banana :D)

Nex · Posted: Wed May 17, 2000 4:13 pm

Hi Narzul!

First for the face I have a little help for you:

[This is a POSER - Figure Face]

Maybe it would help you to have a picture you can study, for instance for the clothes, while you draw.

Hope this did help..

Cya

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- Nex

http://www.geocities.com/nexxus00/

lotor · Posted: Wed May 17, 2000 11:15 pm

Very good so far.
....first i would darken up her eye that is in shadow. Then I would darken all the shadows a little more. Maybe make some of the shadows fade into the background.
...Try putting a few )Subtle( highlights where the light is reflecting the strongest.
...Lastly I would try to crispen up the parts mainly the parts that are in the light.
ciao

lotor · Posted: Wed May 17, 2000 11:16 pm

Also maybe you could play around with a warmer color a little and just put an accent of that color somewhere in the piece.
bye

Lange_Pisang · Posted: Wed May 17, 2000 11:22 pm

hmmm...

Now I see the pic...Strange...aah well...

Ok, here's my opinion:
It's kinda stiff isn't it? Try to make her a little bit more relaxed...ok?

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http://www.geocities.com/lange_pisang/Photoshop_Art/KruegerB.gif
awwwwww...still have to learn a lot,
-Lange Pisang (Long Banana :D)

SaltyDog · member Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2000 Posts: 206

Um...this piece needs alot of work. I realize the artist is probably a beginner so I'll play nice :P First of all the pose is rather stagnant and I'm not sure anyone would, even in their right mind, stand that way. There are some basic anatomy issues here: i.e. neck, breasts, abs, arms. No matter how good the painting if the drawing is off, it suffers. Before you go in and dodge and burn, check the simple stuff.
BTW lotor is my slave...he got out of his cage late last night and typed away like a fiend before succumbing to the tazer shocks from my lab assistants.

Narzul · junior member Member # Joined: 23 Apr 2000 Posts: 13

yes salty dog u are correct in your assumption, this is the first time i tryed to draw a woman... 99% of my drawings are of men,aliens or animals...i knew the anatomy was abit off with the pose but i was concentrating on the trying to make the face look right..
tnx for your help oh wise ones..i hope i get better now that i got a tablet

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-Ori