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Dranime88 junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Apr 2000 Posts: 4 Location: Atlanta, Georgia, USA
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Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:24 pm |
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Hey, freind directed me to this forum. I'm posting some of my pics. please feel free to critisize them. i can use pointers too.
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above member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2000 Posts: 272 Location: marlboro, NJ
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Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:30 pm |
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Not much to criticise on the pics, they look pretty cool. Was it done in POV-ray? Incubus rocks  |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:37 pm |
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Nice. Very moody and atmospheric. Only suggestion I have is to maybe fancy up the text a bit. The lettering is too intrusive, it kind of detracts from the overall composition. Just fancy up the text and those pics would be great. |
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Guy member
Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 602 Location: British Columbia, Canada
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Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:59 pm |
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its not bad. kinda to much pink for a hell dont you think. maybe warm up the colours a bit. add more orange and yellow. probly best to get rid of the blue, but if you really want blue in the pic(s) i would suggest toning it down a bit. its to saturated.
hope that helps. you have a very good start. |
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