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a_sh
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:34 pm     Reply with quote
I must admit, posting this here among such fantastic pieces was not easy, but since i've already started posting in the other forums, i figured i'd at least post something here in the gallery.
You know, to not just be a talker. Be abit of a doer aswell. Smile

This might be the only picture i've ever really finished. It's a painting i did last year, when i still played Wow from time to time.
Enjoy!

Oh, and please - fire away with the crits if you find anything.


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:50 am     Reply with quote
My only crit is that he doesnt have a long white beard like my druid had Smile

ok thats not much of a crit is it.

Oh wait, I do have one.

He is leaning back too far. His feet are forward and shoulders are too far back. Try to stand, or get a friend to stand in that position, you'll fall over. Or at least look very awkward.

This pose makes him look like the victim of an attack. Being pushed back.

It seems he is casting a spell so maybe leaning him forward focusing his magic for an attack would be better. I know you wont be changing this image, just for future thought.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:20 am     Reply with quote
good point.

i think i was aiming at a frog-perspective, but you are right, it do make him look blown back rather than seen from slightly below.

almost makes me want to go back in there and redo him.
better use that energy towards new work instead though.

all the amazing speedpaintings in here is too inspirational! Very Happy

thanks for the crit!
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