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cgaddict junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2008 Posts: 14 Location: Long Island City, NY
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:02 am |
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Portrait of two friends. I had a blast painting this one, and I learned a lot about skin tones as well. Feedback always encouraged
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B0b member
Member # Joined: 14 Jul 2002 Posts: 1807 Location: Sunny Dorset, England
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:42 am |
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looks great i'm sure they'll be over the moon with it!
i'd take out the highlights on the noses tho' makes them look like they have greasy skin.. |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:25 pm |
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Looks good - I think both noses are far too bright, though. They're dominating both faces and don't seem to have much form. I also notice that her left eye (our right) is far more prominent than her right (our left) - I think it's the heavy shadows around her top lid and the outer edge that aren't present in the other eye. |
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nanshu member
Member # Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 71
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:53 pm |
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It's a picture that is attractive for impress.
How're you have imagined that ? which , I can not can sketch . |
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cgaddict junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2008 Posts: 14 Location: Long Island City, NY
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:25 pm |
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B0b: They liked it indeed Good point about the noises, I went a bit too crazy with the highlights I admit.
Tinusch: Excellent points, especially regarding the eye - I knew something was off in that regard, couldn't put my finger on it until you pointed it out.
nanshu: Thank you. It's not so much 'imagined', as this is a portrait piece, so it was very highly referenced. |
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pmpn Guest
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:54 pm |
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it looks good. detailed work in hair part i like most |
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