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cgaddict
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:02 am     Reply with quote


Portrait of two friends. I had a blast painting this one, and I learned a lot about skin tones as well. Feedback always encouraged Smile



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B0b
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:42 am     Reply with quote
looks great i'm sure they'll be over the moon with it!

i'd take out the highlights on the noses tho' makes them look like they have greasy skin..
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:25 pm     Reply with quote
Looks good - I think both noses are far too bright, though. They're dominating both faces and don't seem to have much form. I also notice that her left eye (our right) is far more prominent than her right (our left) - I think it's the heavy shadows around her top lid and the outer edge that aren't present in the other eye.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:53 pm     Reply with quote
It's a picture that is attractive for impress. Very Happy Embarassed

How're you have imagined that ? which , I can not can sketch .
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cgaddict
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:25 pm     Reply with quote
B0b: They liked it indeed Smile Good point about the noises, I went a bit too crazy with the highlights I admit.

Tinusch: Excellent points, especially regarding the eye - I knew something was off in that regard, couldn't put my finger on it until you pointed it out.

nanshu: Thank you. It's not so much 'imagined', as this is a portrait piece, so it was very highly referenced.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:54 pm     Reply with quote
it looks good. detailed work in hair part i like most
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