[Lean Bean McQueen]

[Affected]

There's a lot of technical issues, most obviously the clothing - get some reference, work out the folds. It's hard, but you'll have to learn it at some point.

The bigger issue, however, is that it's a skeleton waving a gardening tool in the bushes. Why? I'd like to know something about the image, what's the point?

[Lean Bean McQueen]

Thank you for the feedback Affected. It's very helpful.

The back story: Uncle Lester, long time buried, was re-animated by a modern day warlock to become his henchman. During his free time, Uncle Lester roam the big city parks looking for lovers who are engaged in heated and moistened romance. Quietly and patiently waiting behind bushes, Uncle STRIKES! with his gravedigging tool at the point were the unlucky couple reach the peak of their romance.

Why Uncle does this? Because he himself was MURDERED THE SAME WAY while shagging poor Auntie Loreta! By nobody else but...
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.the WARLOCK himself!!!