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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 12:35 am     Reply with quote
hello.its been a minute..assignment for school...photoshop /ink...tell me what you think


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:16 am     Reply with quote
heheh nice painting man ;>
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:37 am     Reply with quote
awesome - love the contrasted color values and subject matter. Very nice!!

Composition seems a bit centered but otherwise great looking piece.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 8:15 am     Reply with quote
I agree with the centered composition thing.. I think if the figure was off to the right a little it would greatly improve the image... but still...

looks like you were trippin on something. Smile j/k

its a fun image.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:48 pm     Reply with quote
...see i definately saw me falling into that bullseye composition...so i thought i could throw it off with the neck elongation...guess he needed a bit more stretchin'....
perhaps some more sneezin...thanks guyssss
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:23 pm     Reply with quote
I can almost feel the phlegm, and the flowers are so sinister!

I could see clearly his nose was irritated but it took a while to notice the handkerchief... I might add some more contrast between that and the body because if if it were a tiny bit more noticeable I think it could help out the theme.

But overall it gets the message across clearly, good stuff Smile
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