[3nasty]

comment please..

[Gotnospoons]

Real cool stuff, I do have a few crits though =D

I would have done a moe dynamic pose with the figure instead of like a profile view. Maybe have the gun facing us a little bit more. Would add more depth to the character.

Something seems funny with the upper anatomy, mainly the shoulders. Looks like her upper body needs to be twisted more to our right to make up for her arms holding that weapon.

I lvoe the background. Great work

I hope this is any help.
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[Capt. Fred]

It's stylish, I like it. Cool rendering style. I like the weightless feel.

I can't understand how the gun is being held. I would expect her thumb to go behind the grip. Is the other arm supporting the gun? Maybe she would make a fist with that hand, or hook it over the other forearm?

The back of the gun is a bit unclear - is it burrowed in her elbow or shoulder? Not a big deal.

[Max]

Very cool image. Nice design and rendering.
I think it lacks depth. And it looks kinda cropped. The compositing would be better if it could "breath".
Anyway. good work!!

[3nasty]

thx!!! guys ..for real, I'm working on that yet .