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Soak member
Member # Joined: 10 Sep 2002 Posts: 211 Location: Germany
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 5:51 pm |
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Hi i made an illustration of a yacht for a free project. [380kb]
photoshop and painter.if anyone has an idea how i could name this 60m yacht i'd be greatly thankful.
or has someone an idea for the 4 letters of "i.n.g.a" ?
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Jabo member
Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2002 Posts: 467 Location: Germany
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:30 am |
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Looks nice. I love the yacht itself, but the background and water looks a little too rushed. The water in front is ok, but the foam at the bow isn't very dynamic. it could use some direction and contrast.
The background isn't defined enough to be recognized as a cliff (that's what it's supposed to be, right?). The clouds are ok, but could still use some work. Also, I can't make out the horizon line as the water seems to ends on different height-levels. Oh, and a the water could be a little more blueish.
The forecastle as some strange gradient towards the bow. But the cabin looks awesome. Very smooth and well designed.
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babyeater junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jul 2007 Posts: 3
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:55 am |
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i really like the line quality. The boat almost looks like a painted 3D model. |
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Soak member
Member # Joined: 10 Sep 2002 Posts: 211 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:40 am |
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ya you r right but they dont alle merge to one point.
thanks for the critics i will try to avoid those mistakes any further.I am currently second term industrial design and have some time left.
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Elleb junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Jul 2007 Posts: 4
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:01 am |
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awesome boat, kind of looks like the Mark 5 the military converted. I think its called a Mark 5. Don't hold me to it. |
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