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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:01 pm |
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Finally got fed up with looking at this one and called it finished... The composition makes my eyes hurt
Bee Territory
This one was a semi-quickie, planning on using it on a Valentine's Day card for my girlfriend
Red Hot
And this was an old doodle I found languishing on my hard drive, thought it could use some attention... I tried colors and rendering but I think it works best as it is
Heavens to Betsy

Last edited by Tinusch on Wed Feb 07, 2007 1:34 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:46 pm |
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We can't stop here, this is bee country!
The composition is indeed not the most fortunate one. I hate to say this, but except the bee guys the whole piece's execution is lacking a bit. Especially the butterfly's pose makes no sense to me and really puts me off. I'd LOVE to see this redone, as I find the concept of it, most of all the menacing bee guys pretty weird and scary and awesome. Guess you're sick of it for now though. |
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bobthedinosaur junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Feb 2005 Posts: 49 Location: Orlando, Florida
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:54 pm |
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i love the bee people |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 1:36 pm |
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Glitter: Haha believe it or not I thought of the same line after naming this one.. But you're right, this one was completely unplanned , it was a series of whims and it shows. I was thinking of taking out the Butterman and putting something in the lower left instead to balance it out, but no ideas yet.
Bob: Thanks, maybe I can salvage this one yet |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:39 am |
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If anyone is still tuned in, I updated Bee Territory... A little better I think |
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