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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 10:11 pm |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 4:12 pm |
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And he strikes again. I have to say that is probably the favorite of your pictures so far. Something about the shading, colors and all that just makes it very appealing to me.
As usual I'll give my crits. I guesss you wanted it like this but the shoulders are a bit too wide for me to let it slip as style thing. For a woman it�s just too much. Probably beyond changing though, at least it�d be rather much to do. Apart from that I�d make her jawline and chin a bit more rounded and lighten the shadow there so it doesn't look like beard stubble. Add some eyelashes and your angel just got a lot more female(apart from the breasts ). I just noticed that the weird sketchty little line on the left top hair irritates me, just distracts me needlessly from the rest of the picture.
Oh and the feet and legs, I love those! |
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Tzan member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 755 Location: Boston MA
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 6:18 pm |
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I agree that some parts look masculine. At first I didnt like that. I do like women with muscles but thats not what this looks like. Its sort of half and half.
Then almost immediately after that I thought that this might be what God would like like as a woman. Still strong and tough looking. Maybe even make the upper arms with more muscles
Nice work 
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MrTrichomes junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Mar 2004 Posts: 37
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:41 pm |
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^ is that what the doctor said when he realized he put the implants on the guy who needed his appendix removed? Nice guns but a little too androgynous for my tastes.
its executed really well though. I like the line work. _________________ www.synestheticstudios.com |
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Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 1:41 pm |
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Thanks everyone. Definitely needed to tone down the testosterone level, shes lookin good now. I redid the mouth and the chin, added some eyelashes, fixed the scribbles in the hair, and shrunk the shoulders.
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Member # Joined: 31 Jan 2004 Posts: 417
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Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 1:51 pm |
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She has very manly calfs and her shoulders are still way too wide, in my opinion that is. And women generally tend to have less broad forehead than men. |
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