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stalka
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 2:12 am     Reply with quote
I have added some new pictures to my gallery , let me know what you think of them.. Twisted Evil


Balance
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Broken Wings


Prisons in my mind






If you would like to see more images please visit my gallery it has just been updated.www.blackrust.com
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:12 am     Reply with quote
wow good work!
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:27 am     Reply with quote
Very nice use of texture and lighting- I like the gothic emotive feel:)
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 4:28 pm     Reply with quote
I love the silhouette look of these pieces. Really nice.

The only crit I would give on these images is that they feel too bland to me due a bit to composition.

First off center weighting your images is only really a good idea when you have soemthing to draw your eye to the object to break up the momotony of the center weighted object. The rule of thirds helps to make a picture more dynamic and allows a more interesting view. An example would be in the second picture where the picture can be cropped on the right closer to the figure, and even our perspective changed a bit so that there's more room on the left of the picture, and the wing at the bottom is more in the frame and perhaps more defined and the missing piece of the statue.

Secondly is kinda what I touched on in my exapmle. And since this is a crit you can take it or leave it. However in the two bottom pics you could possibly figure out a better position to view the figure from. On the bottom piece, what's the most important part of the piece? The room, the figure, or the fact that the figure is a permanent piece of the floor. in either case you would treat the same setup in different ways.

Lastly the cracks in the stone of the figures in believable in the bottom one, but the middle one looks like lines painted on a figure. Whatever you did in the bottom one, do it again for the middle one.
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