[Terry G.]

did this a while back for a bud & his band.
what ya think ?

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[TheNeverman]

interesting compostion, but the execution could use some clean-up...

badly compressed 'nuts' in the background, and the comping in of the instruments in the foreground is really rough... just needs some more time spent on the project...
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[neff]

aar! this really hurts my eyes... very bad compression, the shape is very messy, disharmonic colors, terrible font (wtf does that line mean?!)

you should delete it and start new, sorry
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[B0b]

you really should look at taking a course or something, u need more practice..

did u do that in paint?

[Terry G.]

Thanks for your "harsh" input.
it was done in digital format in a rush (less than 30 mins) .
the top line is the same as the bottom line just in musical notes, they wanted the nuts as a back drop as they are nuts. (the nuts were defused to produce a glare)
yes the musical instruments could have been cut better.
explain your deff of "better compression" ?
I expected some criticism but geez guys
naw at 65 I aint going to go back to school, they liked it and they knew it was a rush job
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[Guy-Incognito]

To be absolutely honest - I thought this was a prank.

I can now understand your intentions, and the image probably does the job that was required, but you're posting this on a forum that is usually of a very high standard.

It's clear you're pretty new to all this and don't have much artistic background. As harsh as that might sound it's true. I would recommend you post this to a more varied web site such as Deviantart.com where people will probably give you fair feedback. I wouldn't even know where to begin with a critique on this.