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Author   Topic : "which photo reference should I use? A or B?"
Walkaer
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 8:53 am     Reply with quote
So I'm working from one of these two references for a painting:
which would you say is stronger, compositionally? why (optional)?

A



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PostPosted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 12:46 pm     Reply with quote
'A' has an uncomfortable amount of head visible, which is distracting. B gets bland and dead at the top.

In my opinion, crop a sliver off the top of B, so that the forehead is visible but the hair falls outside the image.

I like it like this.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 1:23 pm     Reply with quote
C

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 9:28 am     Reply with quote
A. Is a very nice composition.

B. and C. look like fashion shots for a pair of jeans.



Use A. for sure.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 5:54 am     Reply with quote
I agree, use A.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 8:10 am     Reply with quote
I definitely like A more than B. With B, the focus seems to be more on the guy himself(like a portrait) and less on the lines and composition that his body creates. To address Capt. Fred's comment, you could maybe take even a little more off the top of A, so it doesn't cut off so close to his eye line(which was kinda distracting for me).
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