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Cpt.Obvious · member Member # Joined: 23 Sep 2003 Posts: 239

I made some picture inspired wih bwhat is happening in the middle east and iraq. lot of inspiration from black hawk down btw Smile

hope U will like it!

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buzzz3d · member Member # Joined: 10 Mar 2004 Posts: 134

I like it very much. You have very good painting skills.

Mikko K · member Member # Joined: 29 Apr 2003 Posts: 639

Really nice work! Very cinematic.

From a storytelling point-of-view it's a bit strange image, because you have two guys portrayed from behind, and they're just basically staring at the wall Smile

It adds to the the suspense though, like they're waiting for a terrorist to ambush them or something.

Anyways, good job!

Godwin · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 5:20 am

Nice, love that lighting.

I tend to think it's quite interesting, the overbearing white light from the door gives it some sense of mystery and/or impending doom, maybe they're cautiously moving through a building which may still have enemy elements within, though of course, the pose of the guy in front could probably be more dynamic to convey that (more with upper body, perhaps he could be leaning to check out the corner?).

But of course, the above is on assumption that they're doing that at all Razz

But looking at their gear, they should know what they're doing heh
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Mega Muffin · member Member # Joined: 07 Oct 2003 Posts: 235

I might add something to suggest it used to be a kitchen. That would make it more powerful I think. Otherwise, it's really great. I like the lighting and colors.

-HoodZ- · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 4:23 pm

nice painting but it seems lacking...i dunno...

see · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 11:23 pm

Very well done Tiger. Would be cool if you could see how the soldiere in front is sweating. I love the soldiere with the backpack. So amazing rendered.!!

But shouldnt he be more "affected" by lighting`?

Keep rocking!

Ragnarok · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 2:44 am

I just love the POV =D
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Rav3n. · Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2005 5:22 pm

awesome. you know you're good, when people comment on what's going on in the pic, rather than how it's drawn Razz

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graet piece Smile

but it has something missing "the Enemy"
i guess you should add some smoke or shadows of other people they gonna attack the soldiers
otherwise, why a two soldiers distroy a kitchen Idea

topeira · Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 11:23 am

absolutly amazing. the technique is awsome!
the un-clarity of the "plot" leaves plenty of room to imagine the story behind the picture. to me it looks like they are going through a house and they are now leaving it and going outside, or waiting for something to enter the kitchen and that's the tention - not knowing who's coming through the light.
i think it's great.

however to counter myself - since i like the subject so much and it's obviouse u r a very skilled artist i just wish i could see more...
more soldiers, more room, more details... i dunno. more.
the composition is great but it feels empty even though it's clear that u put a lot of effort into every small detail. it's gotta be over 10 hours of work.

still - give it a 9! gorgeous!
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