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 Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 9:29 am |
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I like the lighthouse and the way you've rendered the shadow sharp at the top and falling into soft diffusion. The standing stone repeats the shape of the lighthouse nicely. It would be nice to see some atmosphere between the lighthouse and the stone. The stars and the general sense of haze in the sky compete a little strongly with the main subject (clash... of the titans?) There are almost two paintings here-one of a lighthouse scene and one of the aroura. I would vary the stars a little more and allow more darkness in the background. For me the shooting star is just another compettitor for my attention rather than a support for a main subject.
Don't get me wrong though I like much of what you've done here. That water inlet is positively anthropomorphic as is the skull-like rock in front of the structure. 
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