[Antialias]

I started this last night, but am running into some of my main problem areas. The color choices could use some work, and the composition doesn't feel as refined as I would like. Also I'm unsure as to what direction I should take the sky. Any comments, changes, additions are welcome. All done in illustrator.

[Jimmyjimjim]

Make the buildings taller with more interesting forms. Kind of like it's moving through a canyon. Would improve composition, too.

>>To add more....

The composition is pretty much split in half. Give the eye more of a path to follow

[jinnseng]

I think you should cut off some of the sky or like Jimmy suggested make the buildings taller.

[Antialias]

Thanks for the comments. I am trying to work in some of the suggestions. Currently I'm working on getting the lights on all the background buildings right without making the image look too cluttered.

[ElfGirlKimmy]

The sky looks a lot better in this newer version.
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