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Hey, all. Just wanted to get some extra eyes on this guy.




Comments, please. I'm concerned about the correctness of the volumes and anatomy.






I'm going for a mannequin look. As you can see, I'm not too concerned about the hair. It's a placeholder... I thought it would look better than yet another bald guy.



How about them choppers? I want them to look straight, white, and "too perfect."



Hmm... some pinching in the nose and the upper lip looks like it needs something...

Need to make him look more sexy in the eyes and jawline.




When fully animated, he has to communicate quite a bit of subtext in his scenes. So he'll need some eyebrows and eyelashes by then.



I look forward to your much respected opinions, as you guys are the experts in my opinion and I've enjoyed the beautiful art on this forum for years.




Okay. Let's get your reactions. Thanks in advance.
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[Stewart one]

some tips. use alot of reference pictures. also id do somehting about the hair, it looks very odd now. perhaps atleas use some kind of bump or something on it? and take an extra look at how an ear looks. youve got a ery square earflap there. Im sure itll turn out good, just keep it up!
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Oh yeah! Got to fix that ear. Hmm. Used reference for the teeth, but not the ear.
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[Iddi]

The teeth look very fake... Perhaps making them a bit more yellow, and a tad darker? And I'd give him eyebrows, and I'd do something about his hair, as mentioned
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