[Capt. Fred]

[edit]thanks feral, I modified the image and deleted the old one but forgot to cahnge url here� fixed.[/edit]

This is a test for an illustration project. This was done in photoshop, but the final will be done on paper.

It's an illustration of my rhythmic finger-tapping dad.

It would be good to get some feedback on this,
sooner the better.

[Feral]

Red square of death mate.
I'm not seeing anything

[Nag]

I think it�s good, and the idea is exelent.

[Mega Muffin]

I think that's a great idea! I love the colors too. However, right now it looks almost like he's playing a piano that isn't there. I would add way more emphasis to the fingers, and take the arms out of the focus. Maybe even make them in sucession, like the first one would have his one finger up, and the next it would be down with another figer up, or something like.

[Capt. Fred]

thanks peeps.
I've done the final now. I don't have my camera here, so I can't show you, but thanks for the input!