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 Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2004 5:28 am |
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just finished the wip image...
c&c r welcome 
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| Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2004 8:34 am |
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That's by far the best work I've seen from you. Good design.
But for one crit his legs are too skinny for his tough mofo torso.
He doesn't seem to have any pelvis either. His left arm (right from our point) should bend more to the left of the picture. The texture in his scythe sticks out too much. And his shoes look as they would be different in size.
A bit more work on anatomy would have made it better.You might try to use more mid tones, don't make all the shadows so black. By painting all highlights quite bright and shadows black the result will propably look quite flat. But as I said, it is very good in design, especially his head. And I like that glyph behind him.
Keep it up, mate. |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 18, 2004 9:42 am |
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tnx a lot for the very careful crit 
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